Erosion Final
~Reality Sucks Series~
(read to the end, don’t freak and e-mail complaints to Mr X)
Written by Thunderbolt1234, Raidrlsr@aol.com Warning
18 or older or get off my story All characters are property of others this
story contains very descriptive scenes of sex , bondage, murder, rape, incest.
Ch 6
It was dark and cold.
Jessica awoke still laying on her bed, legs askew. Her stomach wrenched and she fell out of bed
on all fours. The world around her spun
and the sound of Comet Girl screaming crashed into her head like a fist.
She began to crawl to her bathroom. Being too low, she didn’t bother with the
light she just slowly moved to the toilet.
Looking down in the dark, she could see the tiny ripples in the
water. Images of a burned partner
rippled with them.
Her stomach gave way and she vomited. Her body lost control and she urinated on the
floor. Hot pee ran down her legs and
puddled at her knees. The screaming in
her head was making her eyes bulge. The
hero fell on her ass, sitting in her own urine and clutched her head.
“OH GOOOODDDD…PLEASEEEE….I’M SORRYYYYY!”
Jessica stood and almost fell slipping in her own
pee. She staggered out of her toilet and
walked to her hidden closet. Moving a
small concealed switch opened the door.
Inside where her costumes.
On the wall next to her where weapons. Guns, knives, grenades, everything she needed
to fight crime. “Useless…I am
useless…it’s all USELESS!” She snatched
a long stiletto off the wall and began to hack at her costume. Pieces of blue and silver spandex flew around
her like leaves falling from trees.
In moments she fell to a fetal position. The hero sobbed uncontrollably. “I’m sorry I’m sorry…oh god, please Chloe
forgive me.” Jessica sat up and placed
the blade against her wrist. She
trembled and slowly began to draw the knife against her skin.
But the knife fell from her hands. “I don’t have the guts…I AM A COWARD!”
Jessica stood and looked at her costumes. She had one undamaged garb left. With a shaking hand she drew the suit and put
it on. Solar Woman fell to the floor
crying. As she did, her hip hit the
remote for her television.
The large flat screen activated and she looked up to
see Eric Sleemo on the news. He had a
nightly commentary on news and world events.
Behind him was a picture of Solar Woman.
“She is a menace, a hindrance to the police and a
danger to citizens. She shot her friend
in cold blood and after injuring two police escaped like a coward.”
Solar now grimaced in a rage. “SLEEMO YOU BASTARD…I WILL KILL YOU!”
Eric continued his commentary. “If she has any civic pride she will turn
herself in, if you got any guts Solar Woman, you will come to the studio and
confront me!”
The heroine stood, reached in her hidden closet and
removed a handgun.
“I’ll visit you son of a bitch, it will make you happy
Chloe wont it…kill Sleemo?”
The hero closed her eyes and felt tired. She slowly fell asleep thinking how killing
the reporter would make her friend happy.
Ch 7
Dragony sat on a large couch relaxing. The office of the former club owner that had
been murdered was well furnished and the villain loved style. Across the room, tied to a chair was Comet
Girl. She sat unconscious minus her
blonde wig.
Two men walked in, one rolling a large flat screen
television.” Dragony stood and snatched
a small vial from a table and opening it, waived it under Comet Girl’s
nose.
The teen suddenly sat upright and looked around
confused. “Wh..what…where am I?” Dragony tossed the vial in a waste basket and
stood back admiring the teen. “You are
in the fine office of a strip club owner who at present is lounging at the
bottom of Carlington Bay.”
Comet Girl still wore her mask but immediately could
tell her wig was missing. She also felt
weak. “What did you do to me…I don’t
feel good?” Dragony stood and with a
mechanical voice laughed.
“It’s a muscle relaxant, make you more…cooperative.”
Dragony retrieved a small remote and activated the
monitor. On the screen was Solar Woman
sitting in her bedroom crying. Comet
looked at the screen confused.
The villain tapped another button and the scene of
their early battle played. Comet watched
as she was hit and flew through the drywall.
In the adjacent room she watched as another goon, concealed, grabbed her
and pressed a rag to her face.
From off camera, a woman dressed like Comet Girl
walked into view, was grabbed by the goon and was thrown out through the
drywall. The scene changed as she
watched the rifle fire and the unknown girl was shot.
“That’s Margie Crenshaw, a double I hired.”
“She was well…surgically enhanced to look like you
and…conditioned to only repeat certain phrases.”
Comet watched the young teen get blasted by the acid
and she cringed hearing the woman scream.
The screen went black.
Dragony grabbed a pair of handcuffs from his desk and
held them close to Comet. Inside the
edge of the cuffs where two tiny
needles. Dragony swung the cuffs around
his gloved finger and dropped them to the floor.
“One needle injected a tracking device into the
wearer, the other…the other injected the wearer with…Erosion.”
Comet tried to pull against the bindings but she had
no strength.
“Erosion…a drug I developed which was at first to aid
patients with depression, but it unfortunately worked in the reverse.”
“It causes the host to develop deep depression, near
the point of suicide, your friend Solar Woman is suffering from the compound.”
Comet looked at the villain in shock. “I swear I will kill you if you hurt her, I
swear!”
Dragony’s mechanical laughter echoed in the
office. “Me…I wont hurt her, she will
hurt herself, she will either go into a depression so deep it can’t be
reversed, or…she will kill herself.”
“The drug works exponentially…if no action is taken to
stop the depression, the drug causes permanent damage…and your friend is well
beyond that point.”
Comet cried out and struggled. “You can’t…you can’t do this, she is a proud
leader…she fights for justice!”
The villain leaned down to Comet and almost spoke in a
whisper. “I know, that’s why I hate her,
she is just so damn righteous…now she is a train wreck looking for a place to
happen.”
Dragony motioned for his men to leave. When the door was closed, he leaned on the
desk and looked at the hero. Chloe…you
can give up the “I am a hero” crap.”
Comet looked at Dragony in shock. “Yes I know who you are, and the beautiful
Jessica Armstrong.”
“You…you unmasked me?’
“Of course I did, I had to confirm who you are for DNA
reasons.”
Comet looked confused.
“DNA…why?”
Dragony picked up a folder from the desk behind
him. “This is your DNA results, it will
be handed in as Margie’s…you will be technically in a hospital for life
undergoing treatments for sever chemical burns and I’m sorry to say brain
damage.”
Comet almost cried, she now shook in horror. “What are you going to do with me?’ Dragony walked to the office door and opened
it. He waved the goons back in the room and
closed the door.
“Well my dear you are going on a long trip to China, I
have a buyer who is looking for a girl…just like you.”
“You…you can’t sell me!”
“Sure I can, you are in a hospital right now,
disfigured…alone, your dad the Commissioner at your bed side crying.”
“But before we send you on your way…the boys want a
treat.”
The goons began to disrobe and grin at Comet. “You see dear, I pay them well, but they like
the fringe benefits that come with capturing a hot young hero.”
The villain handed one of the goons a needle. “It will only last an hour, so enjoy
but…don’t damage the goods.”
Ch 8
Morty and Bill walked nude to the still confined Comet
Girl. She watched in horror as one of
the men flicked his hard cock and grinned.
“Give it too her Bill, lets have some fun.”
Bill held the hypodermic and moved to the teen. Comet Girl struggled as hard as she could but
the ropes held. Morty moved to her
quickly and held her shoulders. The
young teen now struggled as hard as she could.
The goon found it difficult to hold her still.
“God damn Morty hold her still or the needle will
break off in her. Finally the goon got a
hold of her long enough for Bill to inject her.
Comet Girl sat a moment in shock. She felt nothing…then her body was on
fire. The hero let out a ear piercing
scream as she convulsed in the chair.
Both goons stood back looking at each other in panic.
“Shit…shit Morty it looks like she is dying!”
Soon, the teen stopped moving completely. Both men thought she was dead. Then Comet took a deep breath and her eyes
fluttered open.
Her skin began to sweat and her vagina felt like it
was an inferno. She gasped and struggled
to breath.
“What…wh…what did you dooooo to me!”
Bill tossed the needle in a waste basket and grinned
at the hero. “Just a little warming up
present, make you feel real good and willing.”
Comet’s head fell back and the room spun. Her nipples became harder than she could ever
remember. “I’m hot…god, my…va…va…mmm
pussy is so wet.”
The teen now smiled at the men seeing their huge
cocks. “Oooo fuck me with them…hurt
meeee!”
Morty untied her and with a yank, stood her. Bill moved behind her and reaching around
encircled her large tits in his hands.
“Nice…firm almost hard…your in good shape Comet.”
The hero casually pulled off her mask and tossed it
aside. “My name is Chloe…can I suck your
cock?” Bill turned the heroine so he
could kiss her. As he did, Morty
unzipped her boots and pulled them off.
The goons tongue and hers entwined and she went
wild. Her kisses slowly changed to
licking Bill’s neck. Morty smiled at his
partner. He slowly slid the zipper on
the back of Chloe’s skirt and slid it down.
The teen wore a pair of matching red spandex panties
which Morty eyed with glee.
Bill continued to kiss the hero as he grasped the
bottom edge of her red and gold top.
Chloe lifted her arms so to make it easier. The goon licked his lips and pulled the
costume top up and off.
Chloe’s 35D tits bounced as the top was removed. “Damn look at those, big tits on a small
woman, such a fucking turn on.”
Morty took the top of Chloe’s panties and slid them
over her ample hips and down. Her
perfect round ass appeared before the goon who lightly kissed the firm skin.
Chloe giggled feeling her ass being kissed. She reached behind and spread her ass
cheeks. Morty slid his hands up the
teens thighs and eyed the wrinkled anus of the hero. He leaned forward and stuck his tongue up her
ass.
Chloe yelped and sweat now covered the teen. “Oh god yesss, up my assss!” Bill viciously grabbed both Chloe’s tits
kneading them and twisting the nipples.
The teen looked at Bill and forced his head down to suck them.
Morty lapped and bit the sensitive flesh of the hero’s
anus. He crawled between her legs and
buried his face in her cunt. Chloe
instantly shook in a orgasm. Bill looked
at her. The teens eyes where closed
tight and her mouth agape. She shook and
grabbed onto Bill for support.
“Shit Mort, the bitch just came, just from licking her
cunt, this drug is fucking incredible!”
Chloe slowly stopped shaking and fell in Bills arms. “Fuck me fuck me please.”
Bill grinned and grabbed the back of Chloe’s
thighs. He lifted her and with one drop,
impaled her on his cock. Nine inches of
man meat slammed balls deep into the teen’s wet cunt.
Chloe screamed.
Her head fell on Bill’s shoulder as she climaxed. The goon began to slam his cock in her as
hard as he could. Morty spit on his hand
and lubed his cock. He moved close and
forced his dick in her ass.
Bill could see his friend and laughed. “Hell yes, double penetrate the bitch!”
Chloe had orgasm after orgasm. Her body was jelly and she almost passed
out.
Ch 9
Solar awoke still on her floor. She had fell asleep on the remote and paused
the image on Sleemo. With gun in hand,
the hero ran to her motorcycle and screeched out of her hidden parking area.
Avoiding traffic and staying to the back streets,
Solar Woman arrived behind KUNT channel 6 studios. She picked the lock on the back loading area
and made her way to the dressing room area.
The hero knew the building lay out because she had been interviewed
there many times.
Peaking around corners and staying to the shadows, the
heroine moved closer and closer to Eric Sleemo’s dressing room.
Peeking in she discovered the dressing room
empty. Thinking, Solar Woman remembered
Sleemo had his own talk show which ran about this time. An evil grin spread across her face. “I will kill the fucker on live television,
that will make you happy wont it Chloe?”
A voice in her head spoke. “Yes…kill him, I will be happy if you kill
him.”
She moved down the hall and stopped short hearing
people moving around. Soon the coast was
clear and she quickly repositioned herself just behind the set of the talk
show.
She could hear Sleemo talking to someone. She peered through an opening in the set and
watched as Sleemo ranted again about the hero’s of the city. Sitting next to him was Doctor Helen Richards
who was the chief physician treating Comet Girl.
The doctor was defending Solar Woman telling the
audience of how the shooting was an accident.
Sleemo countered her claim telling the camera how the heroines where a
menace and caused problems for the authorities.
Solar grit her teeth hearing the reporter. Now the voice in her head echoed over and
over. “Kill him…kill him…”
She walked around the set and into the light. Aiming the 9mm Beretta with a Aurora super
short silencer, she yelled. “DIE YOU SON
OF A BITCH!”
Richards screamed and fell out of her chair. “NO SOLAR…NO!”
The heroine smiled seeing Sleemo’s look of
horror. She pulled the trigger.
“CLICK.”
The gun didn’t fire.
Solar looked at the gun for a mere second then she was on the floor
shaking.
The heroine was being zapped with 50,000 volts. Behind her stood a security guard holding a
Taser.
He continued to shock the hero every time she tried to
move.
Sleemo jumped from his seat and grabbed the heroine by
the hair. He wrenched her to the stage
so she faced the camera. “SO YOU THINK
YOU CAN KILL ME…YOU…YOU FAILURE…YOUR HERO CAREER IS AT AN END!”
Sleemo held Solar Woman by the hair and pushing her
face towards the camera…unmasked her.
Richards, the guard, camera man and the millions of viewers
sat in shock as the face of Jessica Armstrong was revealed. Jessica felt the cool rush of air on her now
exposed face. The doctor stood and
pushed Sleemo from the hero.
“Get away from her you monster.”
Richards helped the hero to her feet and looked at
her. “Solar…um…Jessica can you hear me?”
Armstrong just stared at her then spoke softly. “I have to kill him, I have to make my friend
happy.”
One of the police officers who had arrested the hero
at the hospital walked on stage and pulled the needles of the Tazer from the
hero’s back. Officer Rob Carter grabbed
for his handcuffs. Richards was going to
protest as the officer handcuffed the hero but knew she had to just stand back.
Sleemo was still laughing as the hero was led off
stage.
Eric looked at the camera and said a quick goodbye to
his audience. Richards fell in a chair
looking depressed.
Backstage, the officer led Armstrong to a
hallway. He was about move her to his
patrol car when Sleemo walked to him and whispered.
The officer smiled and grabbed the hero by the arm and
led her down a hall.
He, Sleemo and the hero walked into a dressing
room.
Jessica stood looking confused. “I’m sorry…I…shot my friend…I don’t want to
go to jail.”
Sleemo walked in the room and closed the door. “You fucking cunt…try to kill me!!!”
He nodded to the officer who grabbed the hero and spun
her to face Sleemo. Jessica gave no
resistance. She was not only still
stunned from the Tazer, she was delirious.
Sleemo licked his lips and reached into the top of the
hero’s costume corset. He grabbed one of
her heavy breasts and lifted it out of the cup.
Still grinning, he pulled the other free. Officer Carter reached around the hero and
kneaded her large tits.
“Nice, nice and firm, gonna be the last time a guy
gets to feel these.”
Jessica looked at Sleemo with sadness. “Are you going to rape me?”
Sleemo knew he didn’t have time to fuck the hero. “No, but I can get a well deserved blow job
from you…then maybe I will let the officer kill you, sounds good?’
Jessica slowly fell to her knees. Tears welled in her eyes causing her make-up
to run down her cheeks. Sleemo unzipped
his pants and dug out his hard cock. He
wasted no time and thrust it in Jessica’s mouth.
Officer Carter began to ram the hero’s head back and
forth. A wet gagging sound gurgled from
Jessica’s lips. Sleemo was in
bliss. He had made headlines. Solar Woman was no more, and now he had his
cock in the hero’s mouth.
The reporter forced his dick down Jessica’s
throat. She gagged and at times turned
blue.
It didn’t take Sleemo long to ejaculate stream after
stream of hot cum down the hero’s throat.
Jessica swallowed all of it.
He fell back on a couch sighing with pleasure. Officer Carter quickly took his place and
rammed his cock in her mouth. He could
hear sirens in the distance and knew additional police would arrive soon.
He laughed looking down seeing Jessica’s hair flying
all about from his fucking her mouth.
“Arghhh arghhh arghhh” was all Jessica could say. The policeman cried out and pulling his cock
free of her lips, squirted cum on her face.
Jessica could feel the hot cum hit her nose and
cheeks. “I deserve this, I am trash…I do
not deserve to live.”
Ch 10
Chloe was almost unconscious. Both men had fucked her for almost an hour
and gave to sign they where going to stop.
She was confused now. She felt
the men inside her body but now she realized she was being raped.
“N…no…stop…I don’t want this…please no.” Morty and Bill realized the drug was wearing
off. The goon in her ass stepped up his
tempo. In his mind he remembered images
of Comet Girl on the news, in magazines, on television.
“I’m cumming…shit I’m cumming in Comet Girls asssssss
ughhh!”
The feeling of her anus tightly wrapped around his
cock made the goon finally climax.
Morty cried out and filled the teens rectum with thick
hot cum. He fell back into a couch
panting. His cock wet and dripping
spooge. Bill slowly lowered Chloe to the
floor on her back. His cock never
leaving her tight cunt.
Chloe looked at Bill confused but still felt another
orgasm building. The goon now fucked the
teen as hard as he could. The hero’s
breasts bounced up and down violently.
Chloe grit her teeth, arched her back and climaxed. Bill felt her stiffen under him. He closed his eyes, rammed his cock as deep
as he could. His cock head was deep in
her cervix.
Squirt after squirt of sperm rich cum filled her. “Damn…fucking damn what a woman, to bad you’re
going to be sold.”
Bill stood on weak legs and picked up her costume
top. He wiped his cock and forehead then
tossed it to Chloe. “Get dressed bitch.”
Chloe now started to remember and she felt
ashamed. She had begged for the men,
wanted their cocks. Every nerve in her
body ached from multiple orgasms.
“You…you animals…I’m going to see you go to jail…y…you raped me!”
Morty cackled with laughter. “I seem to recall a cunt screaming FUCK ME!”
Chloe tried to stand but fell back on the floor. The muscle relaxant still coursing through
her body. She pulled her top on and
scrambled to find her panties. The
feeling of wet cum dripping down her thigh made her stop in horror.
“You…you came inside me…oh god no.” She knew she was ripe for getting pregnant. Sitting on the floor she could see the white
goo leaking out of her vagina.
Bill squeezed out the last drops of cum from his cock
and flung it on Chloe. “Don’t expect
child support payments from me dummy, besides where your going…they will take
the kid and sell it anyway.”
Chloe now began to cry. She screamed and beat her fist on the
floor. Like a child, she stomped her
feet and yelled in a rage. Both men laughed. Monty stood and kicked the teen. Chloe fell in a fetal position sobbing
uncontrollably.
Dragony walked in looking down at the teen. His biomechanical armor whirred and buzzed as
he grabbed Chloe by the hair and lifted her in the air.
“Stop crying you stupid bitch…you wanted this, you are
a hero…you think this wouldn’t happen?’
With his enhanced strength, the villain tossed the
teen across the office. She slammed into
a wall and was knocked out cold. “Get
some rags and soap…wash this cunt, her buyer will be here soon.” Both goons quickly ran to a bathroom and retrieved
the items.
Ch 11
Jessica had given up.
Any willpower she had was now totally gone. Her identity had been revealed, her best
friend lay in a coma and now two men had raped her.
Sleemo pulled her costume back in place and watched as
a satisfied Officer Carter led her out.
Eric reached in his pocket and pulled out the blue mask. He smiled and put it on his face. Looking in the mirror he smiled and danced
around. The smell of Jessica’s perfume
from the mask made him horney again.
“I gotta get a hooker tonight, make her wear this…hell
yes!”
Jessica Armstrong was stripped of her costume and
given a orange prison jumpsuit. While
being stripped the policemen enjoyed groping her. “We just need to search you…for weapons.” The cop stuck his fingers deep in Jessica’s
cunt. Then she was led to a large lit room where her mug
shot was taken. The photo was of a
broken depressed woman.
Afterwards, the hero was literally thrown in a
cell. In confinement, Jessica screamed
and begged jail personnel to let her kill herself.
Chloe Hamilton awoke in a box. Her ears continually popped due to pressure
making her realize she was on a jet.
Hours past and Chloe was forced to pee in her costume.
When the box was opened she was yanked out and thrown
to the feet of a Chinese drug lord named Chi.
He smiled and ordered his men to strip her. For several hours, Chi and his men gang raped
the teen.
Chloe eventually became pregnant and was forced to
work in a warehouse preparing Cocaine.
She gave birth to a daughter on the floor of the warehouse and the child
was taken from her as she screamed.
Chloe never saw the outside of the building. She was kept working on coke in the day,
servicing men at night.
Eric Sleemo won several awards for scathing
documentary’s about Solar Woman. He
became rich by suing Jessica Armstrong’s estate. He now lives in her mansion and has control
of all her money.
The once heroic Jessica Armstrong aka Solar Woman
spent the rest of her life in a prison hospital. Deemed insane, the raven haired beauty spends
all day in therapy, and all night in bed with prison doctors fucking her.
Margie Crenshaw, Comet Girls double died a week after
Jessica Armstrong’s capture. Now the
hero was on trial for murder. A trial
she lost.
Epilogue
Dragony stood in the office he had held Comet Girl
in. The villain had followed all the
reports on the trial and conviction of Jessica Armstrong. As the guilty verdict was spoke, the villain
sighed.
The powerful combat cyber armor slowly opened. Doctor Helen Richards stepped out nude and
covered in sweat. The armor had poor air
circulation. A problem she would need to
fix.
She remembered all she had done. When she had been taking Comet Girl’s mask
off she was stunned to find the hero wore a wig. She had to race to the hospital and cut
Margie’s hair to match the real Chloe Hamilton.
Walking out of the surgical ward, she was shocked to
see Solar Woman standing there, looking at the bag of hair. Luckily she had assumed it was a wig and had
no suspicions of it being fresh cut hair.
Her men had hidden holograph projectors and speakers
in Armstrong’s bedroom. This would let
the hero see images of Comet Girl floating around the room. Richards had not planned on Jose Garcia
fucking the drunk hero. But it did make
for a good porn which Richards would leak to the internet.
Since she was Chloe’s doctor, she switched the DNA
report so it would be confirmed the woman in the hospital was Chloe Hamilton.
Her plans for killing Commissioner Hamilton took a
strange turn when the drug which had destroyed Jessica’s willpower caused her
to now want to kill Eric Sleemo.
Richards quickly called Sleemo and volunteered to be a
guest on his show. She also tipped off
Officer Carter as to Solar Woman being at the studio.
While Jessica slept, Richards gained entry into the
hero’s mansion. She unloaded the gun in
Jessica’s hand and while there, fingered the sleeping hero, then sat on her
face. Richards smiled remembering the
massive orgasm she had.
The doctor laughed and picked up the costume Solar
Woman had been stripped of at the police station. She had taken a mask from the mansion as a
souvenir.
The mask fit perfectly.
Through connections she had got the costume at a very
high price. A blow job to the officer in
charge of storage. She put the costume
on and frowned seeing her tits where not big enough to fill the corset top.
“I need to get a boob job.” She walked around the office in the high heel
boots. Then ran her hands down the
costume and between her legs. The images
in her head of Jessica Armstrong being fucked by her worker made her soaking
wet.
She pulled a vibrator from the desk and pushed it
under the blue spandex bottoms of the costume.
Laying on the floor, Richards watched herself in the mirror. The costume and mask turned her on so much,
she shuddered in a orgasm quickly.
She fell back panting, the vibrator still humming in
her cunt. “Dragony…ha ha Dr Agony…two
hero’s down and many more to follow.