Erosion Part One
~Reality Sucks Series~
(read to the end, don’t freak and e-mail complaints to Mr X)
Written by Thunderbolt1234, Raidrlsr@aol.com Warning
18 or older or get off my story All characters are property of others this
story contains very descriptive scenes of sex , bondage, murder, rape, incest.
Ch 1
Solar Woman and Comet Girl quietly walked through the
closed nightclub. Sol Horwitz, a street
vendor and informant, had given them a tip that an arch nemesis of theirs,
“Dragony” was hiding in a old nightclub downtown. He and his followers had already murdered
three club owners and taken over the business’.
Besides prostitution drugs and human slave sales,
Dragony was wanted for the assault and near killing of a friend of theirs,
Luster Lass. The heroine had been jumped
and attacked as she investigated a nightclub where Dragony was rumored to be.
When the police arrived after a report of gunfire and
a fight, they found Luster beaten, raped and shot. She also had severe chemical burns on her
hands and arms. Solar had seen these
burns before and surmised Dragony used a spray blast of chemical acid from his
mask, similar to a dragon breathing fire.
Solar motioned to Comet to move near a door and
stay. The blue and silver heroine took a
stance in front of the door and prepared to kick it in. Comet Girl could hear movement and murmuring
from behind the door.
Solar Woman brought her hand up with three
fingers. “On three, one two three!” She kicked the door in. It flew off the hinges and slammed into as
goon standing on the other side.
Solar shoulder rolled into the room as Comet swung
around the door frame and attacked the nearest goon. One foe opened fire with a M-16 assault rifle
and tried to shoot the blue clad heroine.
The bullets sprayed the room. Wood and dry wall bits filled the air. Comet Girl jump kicked a pistol out of the
goons hand and continued to spin kicking the attacker across the jaw. Solar quickly dispatched the machine gun
wielding thug.
Dragony jumped from a hiding position and swung a hard
punch across Solar Woman’s jaw. The
heroine was not ready for the attack and felt the full impact of lead weighted
sapper gloves.
Comet Girl saw her friend falling backwards spraying
blood from her mouth. She jumped and
flipped in the air landing with both boots against Dragony’s chest. The villain grunted and flew backwards.
As Comet landed, a goon dove at her, smashing her and
himself through a dry wall. Solar
quickly stood and watched her friend vanish through a hole in the wall. She moved to help but Dragony stepped in
front of her. His mechanical voice
laughed. “Dumb bitch, you think we are
not ready for an attack?’
Solar saw movement out of the corner of her eyes and
could also hear Comet fighting in the other room. The goon who had the M-16 leveled it at the
hero. Dragony motioned to the goon. “Waste her!”
Solar dropped backwards hitting the floor on her back
as the goon opened fire. The rounds
chewed up boxes and support beams but missed their target. The hero pulled a small metal grenade out of
her belt and tossed it at the goons feet.
He looked down just long enough to see a flash bang detonate.
The goon staggered and blinked his eyes. Solar kick flipped to her feet and grabbed
the goon. As she wrestled with him, she
saw Comet come flying out of the hole in the wall. She landed hard at Dargony’s feet.
The villain grabbed the heroine and yanked her up to
face him. He laughed and tried to spray
her with acid. But the spunky teen
kicked him in the shin and moved aside of the spray.
Solar continued to wrestle with the goon and both
where now fighting to control the assault weapon. Comet punched Dragony in the stomach but
screamed as she felt her fist hit solid metal.
“Body armor you dumb whore!”
Solar pulled the goon to her and head butted him. She yanked the rifle out of his hands but in
doing so…it fired. Comet Girl swept her
boot across Dragony’s legs knocking him down.
Then she felt a sharp pain in her back.
Solar looked in horror as the bullet hit her friend in
the lower back. Comet staggered a
moment, fell to her knees and looked at her friend in shock. “You…you shot me!”
The goon Solar had been fighting with kicked her in
the crotch and then grabbed the rifle.
Dragony, seeing his chance, grabbed Comet Girl by the neck of her
costume and wrenched her to face him.
His mechanical laughter echoed in the nightclub. He aimed and blasted a massive deluge of acid
on the teens face.
Solar screamed in horror seeing smoke billow off her
friends face. Comet fell to the floor
writing in agony as her skin was burned off.
Dragony ran through the hole in the wall, his goons followed.
Solar ran to her friend and picked her up, cradling
her in her arms. Comet gagged and
muttered. “I…can’t feel my legs…you shot
me…why?” Then Solar began to cry as
large portions of Comet Girl’s face fell off.
Her mask had melted into her skin and Solar could see
the teens teeth and nasal cavity.
The young hero began to convulse and gag. Her lungs had been burned when she inhaled
the acid.
Ch 2
Solar stood in the emergency room of Landspark
Hospital. People walked by staring at
her in costume. Some knew her from the
media, some just thought she was an oddity.
Doctor Helen Richards walked out of surgery still in bloody scrubs.
In her hand was a plastic bag with what looked like
blonde hair. Solar Woman realized it was
Comet Girl’s wig.
“Solar Woman…she is alive, but on life support, her
spinal cord was severed and as far as I can tell she will never walk
again.” The heroine did her best not to
cry. “Also, most of her facial tissue is
gone, we can try skin grafts but she will never look…normal.”
Solar now sobbed and turned from the doctor. “Um…Solar…she said you shot her…is this
true?”
The heroine turned and looked at the doctor in a rage. “I DIDN’T SHOOT HER…THE GUN…JUST WENT
OFF…I…DON’T KNOW!”
Doctor Richards made a motion with her hand unseen by
the hero. Behind Solar, two police
officers quietly walked up to the hero.
The doctor turned to walk away and spoke over her
shoulder. “She is in a induced coma, all
she keeps saying is you shot her.”
The police now spoke to the hero. “Solar Woman, I am sorry but I have to place
you under arrest for assault with a deadly weapon.”
The hero turned and looked at the officers in shock. “You can’t arrest me…I did nothing
wrong!’
One officer had removed his cuffs from their pouch and
pointed to the wall. “Stand over there,
face the wall and please cooperate.” The
heroine turned and did as she was told.
The officer drew her gloved hands to her back and snapped on the
cuffs.
The hero closed her eyes and fought back the
anger. ‘I didn’t shoot her, the gun…just
went off, please you have to understand!”
One officer leaned close to Solar Woman’s ear and whispered. “I got two kids…they both have Comet Girl
posters in their rooms, I have to go tell them, their hero is paralyzed and may
die…because of you.”
Solar Woman looked at the officer in horror. “Please you have to understand…I didn’t shoot
her…she is my friend!”
The officer who had whispered to her smirked. “Yea…friend…you wont be so smug when we get
you downtown and we pull that mask off for your mug shot.”
Now Solar Woman trembled in fear. Her identity revealed, her face on every
media outlet. “NO…dear god no, I didn’t
do anything wrong!”
The police shoved her to an elevator to take her to
the lower parking garage. They stopped
several people wanting to board the elevator and gave them a stern look.
The elevator trip was quiet sans the sobbing of Solar
Woman. She couldn’t think straight. Her thoughts kept repeating the
shooting. “Did I pull the trigger, what
did I do…Oh god did I shoot my friend!”
“You shot me…you shot me!”
Solar closed her eyes and spoke quietly to the
officers. “I shot my friend…I don’t know
how, but I did, it was an accident.”
Solar now thought of the police station. The media, her standing getting her photo
taken, and one of the policemen…removing her mask.
The cuffs bit into her skin and she felt her wrist get
cut. “Can you loosen these, they
hurt.” The officers ignored her. Continuing to think about what was going to
happen to her made her realize…she had to escape. She thought about what had happened. “I did it, I shot my friend…why escape…I am
guilty…but I don’t want to go to jail!”
As the elevator doors opened she reacted on
instinct. The hero brought a boot heel
hard against one officers shin breaking his leg. The other motioned to draw his weapon and received
a kick to the groin.
Solar ran as fast as she could through the parking
garage. She ducked and dodged around and
behind cars. For a moment she stopped
and caught her breath. It was hard to
run with your wrists cuffed and she couldn’t keep her balance. In the distance she could hear one of the
officers running and calling for assistance.
The hero leapt over a wall and found herself
outside. She saw a huge dump truck
slowly driving by and she made a dash for it.
With the best of her athletic ability, she jumped, caught her foot on a
step and dove into the back.
She landed on a pile of sand and remained still. In a short while she found herself moving at
a high speed on a freeway. For an hour
she remained still and closed her eyes to try and rest. But the image of Comet Girl looking at her
slammed into her head.
The truck stopped at a rest area and when she could,
Solar Woman jumped from the back and ran into some trees.
Ch 3
Doctor Richards walked from Comet Girl’s room carrying
a small container of urine. She had
removed a sample of the teen’s waste to examine. Behind her unseen a man moved in the
shadows.
The figure watched as the doctor entered the elevator
and depart the floor. The man now slowly
entered the heroines room and stood looking at her. He moved closer seeing her face covered in
bandages and listening to the monitors beep.
He looked in the waste basked and found a small used
vial of Propafol. He knew the drug was
used to induce deep sleep in patients in sever pain. The figure grasped the edge of the blanket
covering the hero and slid it down.
The cover rose high as it passed over her large
breasts and down as it slid across her narrow waist. When the blanket was at her ankles, the
figure slithered his hand under her hospital gown, up her calf and between her
legs.
His fingers felt the soft petals of her vagina which
he rubbed. He was aware she was
paralyzed and could feel nothing but the sensation of his fingers touching a
heroines cunt gave him a raging erection.
Pushing her labia apart, the man slowly forced one
finger deep in Comet Girls cunt. “You
hero’s all are high and mighty, stand for being pure, good and justice…but you
all dress like sluts.”
The figure pulled his hand from beneath the teen’s
gown and with a smile, he licked his fingers.
“Sweet, delicious, not a virgin though, you had some cock in your life,
not that pure are you.”
With care, the figure untied the sash of Comet Girl’s
gown and he opened it. His eyes gazed at
two huge firm teen breasts. “My name is
Mike, I am an orderly in the geriatric wing, I heard they had brought you in, I
just had to take a chance…to fuck you.”
Mike encircled one of the teens breasts with both
hands. He kneaded and rubbed the orb
watching her nipple get hard. “Good that
you aint fully paralyzed, would be a shame you not get to feel me playing with
these jugs.”
He bent over and sucked one of her sensitive hard
nipples. His tongue traced every wrinkle
of the firm organ. After a while, Mike
tasted something sweet. He looked and
saw the faint traces of breast milk leaking from her nipple. “Milk…shit, you been knocked up before, what
you get an abortion?”
The orderly continued to suck and knead her
breasts. The more he handled them, the
more milk leaked out. Mike drank all he
could. “Fucking whore, bet you been
fucked by a lot of guys.”
The orderly knew he didn’t have a lot of time. Doctor Richards would be back soon to check
on her. With a grunt, Mike climbed on
the bed and unzipped his pants. His cock
popped out from under his boxers and he massaged it.
“Big huh, bet you haven’t had a cock this big in your
life.” The orderly positioned himself
over Comet Girl and gradually slid his dick in.
“Ugh, tight…fucking tight.”
Mike pushed and
shoved until his nine inch cock was buried deep in her hot cunt. “Oh god…it’s like fucking heaven!” The orderly fucked her slowly, not wanting to
rush. He would never get a chance like
this again. “I would rather be fucking
Solar Woman, who is she, is she a good fuck?”
He closed his eyes and smiled hearing the wet sound of
his cock sliding into her pussy. After a
few minutes, Mike felt the boiling hot cum surging up his cock. He pushed in as deep as he could and
climaxed. Hot cum flowed into Comet Girl
filling her womb.
Mike fell on her panting. “Hell yes, I fucked Comet Girl…I did
it!” The orderly slid off the teen and
he stood looking at his white cum leak out of her pussy. He dug
in his pocket and grabbed his phone. The
orderly took as many pictures as he could.
Most of her laying with her legs spread. Some with his face licking her nipples.
When his camera phone was full, Mike zipped his fly
and fixed her dressing gown. “I may be
back tomorrow, you will be here wont you?’
With that he departed.
Ch 4
Sitting in the trees, Solar Woman used a small tool
she kept in her boot. In a short time
she removed the handcuffs and nursed the wounds from the manacles. Then she sat and cried. “I shot her, I did it, I am a wanted
fugitive, it was an accident…oh god help me.”
With her eyes closed all the heroine could see was
Comet Girl’s face in pain and shock.
“You shot me…you shot me…you shot me.”
“She wont walk again…she is disfigured…oh god her
face!”
The heroine looked around the rest area and watched as
a mobile home pulled in. A woman and man
jumped out laughing and entered the toilet area. This was her chance. Solar Woman quickly ran to the trailer and
climbed in. She quickly found a chest of
drawers and dug through the clothing. In
a short time, she had a pair of jeans, t-shirt and panties.
The heroine ran back to the trees and changed her
clothes. She would have to wear her
trade mark boots but they would be concealed under the jeans. She bundled up her clothing and after the
mobile home departed, found a old paper bag and placed her costume in it.
Now Jessica Armstrong, former Mayor, former hero
walked back to her city. Her wrists
throbbed and she couldn’t stop crying.
“I am a good person, I help the poor, I am a hero…I was.”
Ahead she came across a diner where she stepped in and
took a seat at a booth. A old dirty
waitress walked up and while coughing, took her order of a cup of coffee. On the television, Jessica looked in horror
as a news flash appeared.
“The condition of the heroine Comet Girl has still not
been released but the police and city officials have issued a arrest warrant
for the hero Solar Woman. The police
have not released any information except she is being sought for questioning in
the young teen’s injuries.”
Jessica watched intently.
“Unknown sources have revealed to channel nine that
Comet Girl is on life support and she has sustained critical injuries. Also due to the injuries, she can not be
identified. This reporter is questioning
why Solar Woman would be now wanted and has not yet been captured.”
The waitress returned with Jessica’s coffee and
coughed. “Can’t believe that so called
hero…Solar Woman would hurt such an innocent girl, I hope they catch her and
give her the chair.”
Jessica held back her tears and sipped her
coffee. She ignored the waitress’
comments and closed her eyes. Her head
was spinning as she tried to clear her thoughts. “You shot me…you shot me.”
After finishing her drink, Jessica departed and
quickly walked to her mansion.
Ch 5
It took her hours but Jessica finally arrived at her
home. She entered the mansion by her
secret entrance so as not to alert her home staff. In her bedroom she stripped the stolen
clothes off and discarded them.
On her vanity, Jessica kept a large bottle of
Cognac. She was not a drinker and she
kept the bottle because it was a gift and it was very decorative. Now she pulled the cork out of the 1924
Hennessey. She used no glass and upended
the liquor.
“I’m so sorry Chloe…oh god, I never thought it would
end like this, I shot you, oh god, it’s my fault!” Jessica now drank more and more of the
liquor. Soon she was drunk.
Sitting nude at her vanity, Jessica looked around the
room and could see images of Comet Girl in agony. Comet Girl looked at Jessica and
screamed. “YOU DID THIS…I AM PARALIZED…I
HAVE NO FACEEEEE!”
The door to her bedroom opened and one of Jessica’s
staff entered. Jose Garcia, her butler
walked in and stopped in shock seeing his employer nude and obviously
drunk. “I am sorry Ms Armstrong, I was
not aware you where home.”
Jessica looked at her butler and wiped tears from her
eyes. Her mascara now smeared, Jessica
dropped the empty bottle of liquor and held out her hands. “Help me, hold me, please.”
Jose walked to her and lifted her to her feet. Jessica couldn’t stand and more leaned on
Jose. “I…I have done something
horrible…I don’t know what to do.”
Jose gazed at her huge breasts and felt the heat of
her body. He had always fantasized about
her. Once he had seen her nude as she
donned a bikini to go sun herself. He
masturbated for days thinking of her.
Jessica collapsed in his arms. She cried and began to tremble. The butler picked her up in his arms and
carefully laid her on her bed. She moaned
and sobbed but all Jose could do was look at her body.
“I didn’t mean too…Oh god I didn’t mean tooooo!” Jose ignored her cries and tried to make her
comfortable. Soon she lay there
delirious and mumbling. The butler
watching her close, softly touched her breasts.
Her nipples immediately hardened under his palm. He had never touched such big breasts before
and his hand couldn’t grab one fully.
“That…that feels good…but I shouldn’t feel good, its not right.”
Jose opened Jessica’s legs and looked at her well
cropped pubic hair. Beneath the dark
black curls, he could see her pink labia.
The folds of skin where wet and glistened. He touched them and with a deft finger opened
her labia to reveal her wet hole.
Jessica now moaned lightly. She opened and closed her eyes trying to
think. But all she could see was Chloe
laughing then screaming in agony. Jose
pushed a finger inside her cunt. Jessica
gasped and opened her legs wider.
“Oh ugh yesss, I need to feel good…destroyed…I have
been destroyed…its all over, its…all over.”
Jose slowly fingered her until to his surprise she
arched her back and climaxed. He grinned
feeling her pussy gush juice all over his hand.
Jessica gasped for air and closed her eyes tight. Images of Chloe flooded her thoughts.
Jose unzipped his pants and dug out his cock. His dream was going to come true. He climbed on the bed hovering over his
employer. Leaning, he took one of her
hard nipples in his mouth and sucked it.
Jessica gasped and ran her fingers into Jose’s
hair. “Make…make me feel good…take away
the pain.”
Jose didn’t know what had happened to her and he didn’t
care. He pushed the head of his cock
against her wet cunt and penetrated her.
Jessica grunted at the intrusion.
She felt the cock deep in her and she succumbed to the initial pain.
Now she lay there in a stupor as Jose fucked her. The feeling of her hot cunt wrapped around
his cock almost made Jose cum to quickly.
He stopped moving and waited a moment.
Jessica now was almost passed out. She felt the cock in her and just let her
body go. Jose bend forward and kissed
her. Her tongue found his and she kissed
back. The taste of Cognac mixed in his
mouth as he roughly kissed her.
Jose licked her neck and bit her shoulder. Jessica cried out and again images of Chloe
pounded her head. The butler now
gradually began to fuck her.
He didn’t want her to come to her senses so he was
slow, enjoying the sensation of her wet cunt walls on his dick. He fucked her for over an hour, stopping
every time he felt a orgasm coming.
Looking down, he smiled seeing his wet cock moving in
and out of her. His eyes stared at her
huge breasts bounce and roll as he fucked her.
Soon he couldn’t hold back. The
butler quickened his pace and subduing a loud grunt, he came.
Hot sperm rich cum flooded her pussy. Jose didn’t think his orgasm would stop. He pumped more and more cum in her until he
collapsed.
Jessica just lay there. She was near passed out and didn’t even
realize she had just been fucked. Jose
climbed off his employer and quickly zipped his pants and left the room.
Jessica’s thoughts now turned dark. ‘I…cant go on…I will kill myself.”
To be continued…