The Adventures of Comet Girl


Disclaimer -- The following material is an original story by Zeta Clarke. Any similarities you may find to other stories are purely coincidental. It should not be duplicated without the permission of its author and its authorized users. Because of the adult nature of the material, this story is meant for mature audiences only.


Note from author (02/11/01)-- Well I hope you like the following story. It's actually the second part of the previous chapter which I was forced to divide up. I do have another part to it, but it will be coming in Chapter 11.


Previously on Comet Girl: Ralph Smith summons the demon Lugio to persuade Comet Girl to quit being a super heroine. While Michael and Becky are searching for the missing Lady Liberty, two demon women attach them. Becky delivers one of the vile creatures a crushing defeat, but is in turn captured by Lugio himself.


Chapter 9 -- Chain of Events

(Golem City)

The glowing red chains wrapped themselves tightly around her wrists. Comet Girl struggled hopelessly with the bonds, but could not budge them. She was forced to watch helplessly as an identical set of chains gripped around each of her ankles. All four of the chains became taunt as they spread her arms and legs wide apart with a force that would have quartered a lesser woman.

Her head ached as sexual images bombarded her mind. Images of demons ripping apart her outfit and ravishing her body blasted their way into her thoughts. She struggled desperately to hold back the flood of desires building up inside her. Comet Girl tried earnestly to figure out what was happening to her. She wanted to know where these strange desires were coming from.

Then she saw a crimson glowing sphere in front of her, floating gently over the small group of spectators that had gathered outside of the convention center. Her attention was then drawn to her friend and fellow superhero below. She could see that Liberty Lad was still unconscious, next to the lamppost a few feet away. Comet Girl angrily watched as the remaining demon woman ripped apart pieces of his costume and fondled his limp body. The demon then rode the superhero's massive erection while he remained helpless.

"Let me go!" demanded Comet Girl as the chains became to slowly wrap themselves around the rest of her beautiful body. She felt the cold metal through her thin outfit. Becky was not about to give up so soon. Even if the odds seemed impossible to beat. She struggled with every fiber remaining in her bound body.

"Comet Girl, I'm surprised. Most women, even super heroines, would have succumbed to my Chains of Lust by now. I see you have fight in you yet," said the glowing ball of light which slowly moved toward her. As the ball approached, it became apparent that it was really a glowing man flowing in the air. That man glided toward Comet Girl and stop just in front of her. He reached over with a hand and touched Becky's cheek with his scaly fingers. His penetrating touch reached under her skin as she turned her head away in repulsed shame.

"Chains of Lust?" repeated Becky looking back at the demon before her. She saw that he had golden colored skin like the grotesque creature she fought moments before. His dreadlocks brushed against her shoulder as he sniffed her neck. She watched the vile creature while a snakelike tongue slithered out the demon's mouth as it breathed. The young heroine then saw a pair of red cutting shears that the monster was carrying in his hands.

"What are they supposed to be?" she asked. But then added in a mocking tone, "Let me guess. Your Scissors of Seduction?"

Lugio laughed. "Wit under pressure. I see now way Mr. Smith was so worried about you. No, these are just ordinary shears. But as my chains drain you of your willpower, so will I remove parts of your attire. Eventually you will completely surrender to my Chains of Lust, and I will expose you in front of the crowd below."

Comet Girl felt slightly embarrassed and afraid, especially when she realized that she could not break free from the chains. Worst of all, she realized that the strange sexual thoughts and urges continued to flood her mind, as if the chain channeled those desires directly into her. She couldn't let the people below see her like this. And what would happen if this demon really did expose her true identity to them.

The demon cut a small piece of fabric from Comet Girl's costume, just above her left breast. He then let the tiny white fragment fall to the ground slowly. "I must admit, I underestimated your strength of will. So I think I'm going to raise the stakes a little. Stick around while I gather a few more audience members. And don't worry, I'll leave something to keep you occupied while I'm gone."

The bound Becky watched the creature created a small ball of red light in his hand. She wondered why he pressed the ball against her crotch as she winced. Comet Girl felt the energy slime its way into her panties like warm butter. Tiny waves of energy pulsed inside her womanhood as her juice began to flow. The walls of her vagina were still raw and sore from Hydro-boy's recent assault on her. But the pain somehow turned to pleasure as the red glow around her chains grew darker.

Meanwhile, Lugio floated gently to the ground. The red aura around him disappeared as his feet connected with the concrete road below. He landed next to a large crater, where Comet Girl had blasted a demon minutes before. He waved his hands in front of him as mist spewed from his fingertips. "Mists of Transport," announced the demon as figures formed within the mysterious haze.

Comet Girl looked down in horror as reporters and cameramen walked out the mist below. She then let out a sensual moan as a small climax took her body by surprise. She felt ashamed, and hoped that the reporters would not capture her next inevitable organism. She watched as more reporters appeared.

Fred Danvers of Playtime Magazine was among the notable. Every super heroine knew and hated Fred Danvers. His Playtime Magazine devotes a special issue each year centered around nude celebrity super heroines. Most of the photos were faked, but on occasion the adult magazine manages to buy a legitimate photo or two from crooks and terrorists, who have been lucky enough to capture a heroine. And because of legal loopholes, Danvers legally publishes these pictures to the masses, much to the dismay of the super heroine community. It was apparent that Comet Girl may be the next centerfold.

Another notable reporter was the gorgeous Kim Li. She looked up at the helpless and teary-eyed Comet Girl above. Kim placed her hand over the Action 2 News camera, and shook her head at Billy, who was holding the video recorder. She then shouted to the other reporters, "Everyone put your cameras down. Can't you see this isn't right?"

The beautiful Asian woman walked up the demon Lugio and demanded Comet Girl's release. Lugio just raised his eyebrow with a surprised look on his face and touched the reporter's forehead with his finger. He said to the reporter, "Is it possible? A reporter with scruple? We can't have that now, can we?"

Kim's eyes glossed over like those of a college Freshman taking his first pop quiz of the year. Her arms fell limp to either side of her attractive body as she almost dropped her microphone. Then she smiled, cocked her head to one side, and turned to her cameraman Billy. She then said, "This is Kimberly Li reporting from the front of the Golem City Convention Center. Just above me is the Comet Girl, Metrocity's newest defender. We are told that tonight her true identity will be revealed to us. The question that remains is, where is Lady Liberty, Comet Girl's mentor and partner..."

Like robots, the other reporters followed Kim's lead as their eyes also glazed over. When Lugio pointed up into the air, everyone focused their attentions on Comet Girl, who remained bound a few feet in the air above them. Another powerful organism overtook the heroine, causing her to cum down her slender legs. She never felt so degraded in public before. And she knew that if she didn't do something soon, the worst was yet to come.

Lugio laughed at Comet Girl's inability to control her sexual outbursts. He surrounded himself again in a devil red aura and sailed up to the bound heroine. He playfully cut the small straps on her outfit with his shears, and watched as her outfit fell victim to gravity. Without those straps, Becky's wondrous breasts exposed themselves to the stunned audience below.

"I can spare you all this humiliation," said Lugio to Comet Girl. "Surrender to me now, and I promise to take you immediately to Demon World with me. They won't have to see what I do to you next."

"I won't your sex slave? No fucking way!!" shouted the defiant super heroine, as she fought back another climax.

"Have it your way then, you bitch. But don't say I didn't offer you a choice. By now, you should be enjoying the effects of my power," said Lugio angrily as he grabbed her necklace and freed it from her neck. It fell to the ground quickly and smashed into pieces as the demon grabbed one of Becky's exposed mammaries with his free hand. "You should be feeling me slowly crushing your frail willpower."

As he said this, he gripped her breast tightly in his hand. The demon's grip was cold and intensely painful, like someone was pressing large blocks of ice against her chest. Lugio knew that without her force field, Comet Girl was powerless against his groping attack on her. He also knew that by deliberately distracting her in this way, he would prevent the heroine from mounting any defense against his Chains of Lust. He whispered to his poor captive, "Your lustful animal side wants to get out, doesn't it? Show me your darkest desires, Becky."

"How do you know my name," said Comet Girl frightfully. She then moaned as a climax sneaked by her.

"Another piece of your mental wall is falling away," said Lugio as he cut another piece of fabric from her outfit. "The chains work both ways. As your willpower is slowly stripped from you, I learn more about you. I'll soon know all your fears and all your secrets. I will possess the knowledge of what turns you on, and what makes you frigid."

Becky felt the demon touch the nape of her neck with a fingernail. Comet Girl's muscles tensed up instantly and then relaxed as he massaged the back of her neck, just below her hairline. The heroine whimpered slightly and bit her lip. She felt a small wave of pleasure course through her body, and she knew then that the demon was telling the truth. Brad was the only other person who had known about her fondness for being touched there.

But then there was an intense pain as Lugio pinched her naked nipple. Comet Girl screamed and thrashed her head from side to side. Becky felt a part of her mind slip away when she momentarily lost concentration.

"Snip. Snip," said Lugio as he cut a large piece of Comet Girl's skirt exposing her smooth thigh. The demon bent down and licked the heroine's newly exposed flesh, leaving it slimy and cold.

"Stop this you fucking monster," demanded Comet Girl. The bondage, the pain, and the humiliation began to take their toll on the tormented heroine. Every part was bound body was tense with sexual energy and frustration.

"Do you give up then?" asked the demon as he kissed her tender, pouting lips. Her ruby red lipstick smeared across his lips as her body succumbed to the affects of yet another organism.

"Never!" she managed to scream with the remain air in her lungs. Comet Girl then bit Lugio's lower lip with her super strength.

"I grow tired of this!" shouted Lugio as he transformed the shears in his hand into several long glowing leather straps. He struck Becky's back numerous times with the straps like a whip. Each glowing piece of leather cut small lines into her soft flesh. Her costume was ripped to shreds as torn pieces of fabric fell to the ground. With each strike, Becky lost more of her control, and her desires began to take over.

The pain was unbearable though. She wanted the demon to stop, but she knew that she could not surrender to him at any cost. She couldn't let the people below, and those watching at home, see her in a weakened state. But her mind began to wander as the chains around her wrists and legs pumped her full of nasty desires. She thought of Brad, her former boyfriend, and remembered how he used to touch her. The first time was when she left her parent's house to live with him. Becky felt Brad running his hands through her long blond hair, and how his chest would press against hers. That was when they would spend hours just hugging. She was always comfortable in him arms. She longed to be there again. Safe.

"I'm sorry Becky," she heard Brad say behind her. The voice was different somehow. Colder.

"Brad?"

"It's me Becky. I've come to take you away from this. Just say you want to be with me, okay."

"I can't. I can't forgive you for what you did to me," said Comet Girl. She wanted to turn to him, and see his face. But she was still trapped by the Chains of Lust. She wanted to be sure it was really him, because the last time she had seen him, he was transformed into a living body of water.

"But I love you baby, and I'll give you everything you want," said Brad as his cold hands grabbed both her breasts from behind. The hands caressed the soft orbs gently and playfully. As he fondled her breasts, she slowly forget what it was that she could not forgive him for.

Becky reacted to his touch with a small moan. She tilted her head back and enjoyed the pleasure building within her body. Becky placed her head down and cried. She wanted to be set free. She wanted to wrap herself around Brad and never let him go. And then Comet Girl felt her skirt being slowly undone. The skirt slid gently off her slender body. And like a wounded bird, it spiraled to the ground. It landed a few feet in front of Fred Danvers, who continued to take snapshots of the heroine with his camera. The only significant article of clothing she wore now was her small silk panties.

Something inside Comet Girl clicked on just then. Angry grew in her, and then she suddenly remembered what Brad had done to her the night she got her powers. She also remembered what he had done just recently in the showers to her and Lady Liberty.

"You raped me, you fucker!" she shouted. "You can't ever give back what you took from me!"

Comet Girl surrounded herself completely in a green glow that grew brighter by the second. Suddenly the chains binding the heroine lost their reddish glow. And Becky ripped them apart with a godlike fury.

Lugio was in shock as his Chain of Lust fell to the ground. "How is this possible? Only a slayer can break those bonds."

"I don't know what you are talking about, but I do know one thing. You should never have made me angry." Becky flew directly at the demon. She cupped her hands together and struck Lugio in the chest. The blast sent him flying toward the ground.

"Wait," demanded Lugio as Comet Girl raced toward him for another blow. "If you don't surrender to me, I will destroy everyone here, including Liberty Lad."

"No. Don't do it," cried Comet Girl.

"Then surrender to me."

"I won't."

"Then innocent people will die so you can keep your honor. You are pathetic as a super heroine," announced the demon. He reached over to one of the reporters and crushed her head with his bare hand.

"No!!" cried Becky. "Please, no more. Don't hurt these people."

"Then come to me now," the demon demanded.

The defeated heroine obeyed as she slowly walked past the cameras and video recorders. She covered her breasts with her folded arms and tried very hard to remain dignified. She shamefully looked into the smiling face of the demon and quietly said, "Please let these people go and I will surrender to you."

"Your willpower is far to strong for me to believe you would completely surrender to me. I want you to prove yourself."

"What do you mean?" asked Comet Girl. She felt so powerless at this moment.

"I order you to strip in front of the cameras."

"No, please don't make me do this."

Lugio placed his hands on either side of Billy's head. He began to squeeze, but Comet Girl then placed her hands on her panties. The demon watched as she slowly and seductively moved one end of her panties over her luscious hip. Then she reluctantly pulled the other end over her other hip. Lugio then ordered to turn around and bend over so the cameras could get a better look at her ass and pussy.

She reluctantly did as she was told. She turned around, and as she slowly pulled down her underwear, she bent over. Everyone at home watching a live broadcast got a wondrous shot of her soaking crotch before the picture was blurred over by the Networks. Comet Girl's eyes began to tear over again.

"Don't do this," said a young man who stepped out of the crowd of spectators. It was Eugene, the man who bumped into Comet Girl during the convention earlier.

Comet Girl turned to see Eugene emerging from the crowd of watchers. "Don't do this Eugene. He'll kill you," said Becky.

"No Comet Girl. I can't do that. The normal guy watches you superheroes save the day, time and time again. Well I'm tired of being a sidekick in a world of heroes. It's time the normal guy steps up and helps the heroes for a change," announced Eugene proudly.

"Hero? You think that woman is super heroine?" Lugio laughed. "Tell me what kind of heroine drops her pants in front of millions this easily. She's a dirty whore of the worst kind. She's one that doesn't know it. I've seen her desires, and know her darkest passions. Believe me, you would not want to save a woman like her, if you truly knew her."

Eugene responded with, "No I haven't seen her desires. But I've seen the good she has done in the short time that she as been in Metrocity."

"But would you save a woman, who forced her own boyfriend to rape her twice, because she wouldn't put out? And what would you say, if I told you she still loves her rapist."

"You bastard demon," said Eugene as he ran toward Lugio with rage in his eyes. A glowing red chain wrapped around his waist, pinning his arms to his side. He struggle, but could not free himself.

"No, please Mr. Demon, don't hurt him," demanded Comet Girl. She placed her hands together and begged the demon to let Eugene go.

"So, it's true. You do have feelings for this man. But you've only just met. You truly are a slut," laughed Lugio.

" Just let him go, and I promise that I'll do anything you want. I let you do anything you want to me."

"But I want your humiliation to be his realization of who you truly are. I'm certain that when he sees your true sluttish nature, that he will give up on you, like everyone else in your pathetic life." The demon engulfed the three of them in a large sphere of redness. When the glow disappeared, the three of them were inside a plush bedroom, complete with red silk sheets handling from the ceiling.

Eugene hung from a chain in the far end of the room. Comet Girl was on her knees in front of him kneeling on pillows along the floor. Her arms were folded behind her back as if held in place by some invisible rope.

Lugio stood behind her, completely naked holding glowing shackles which he secured around her neck, arms, and ankles. He bent down and liked the side of her face with his snakelike tongue. He then whispered to the silent Becky, "Unless you want me to kill this man right in front of you, I suggest you obey me. Do you understand?"

Becky stared angrily at the demon blankly.

The demon grabbed her blond hair and tugged on it until Comet Girl let out a scream. "Understand!" he shouted.

"Yes," cried Becky. She felt Lugio pushing her head down to the ground in front of her. This left her backside sticking up in the air defenselessly behind her. The bound heroine felt the demon's cold hands on her hips, and then the distinct thrust of his cock in her already wet pussy. She bit her lip as the demon's devilishly large erection tore its way through her vagina without any care for her comfort. The walls inside her womanhood stretched beyond their limit as the demon pounded away at her sex. Comet Girl looked up at Eugene and saw the angry in his eyes.

Lugio ordered her to cum for him, and she dropped her head in shame as an organism took her completely. Her previous ordeals were nothing compared to her current situation. She could feel his manhood inside her as she came, and felt ashamed that her body was now making it easier for him to continue is vile assault of her virtue. And this creature of flesh knew far to well how to pleasure her body.

"I have a challenge for you Comet Girl," said Lugio. He raised his hand in the air, and a red hourglass appeared. "I bet that I can make you climax by the time the sand runs out of this hourglass. And if I'm right, I will reveal your secret identity to this puny man before I kill him in front of you. Then I will claim you as my personal sex toy."

"Comet Girl, don't worry about me. Just get out of here while you can," said Eugene. He tried to reach for something in his pocket.

The demon pulled his dick out of the heroine swollen sex. It was shiny from his captive's juices. Lugio's penis then separated into three distinct cocks. He shoved one of them into Comet Girl's unsuspecting mouth. Her luscious lips barely fit the enormous member. She could taste her own cum on the massive dick. The demon moved it back and forth until it worked its way to the back of her throat. She nearly choked on the penis as it continued to pound its way into her.

Another penis was inserted into her ass. She tried to scream, but her cries were muffled. She felt her insides being torn apart by the demon as he continued to violate her. Ashamed, she desperately wanted to turn her head away from Eugene, who continued to watch her painfully humiliating rape unfold in front of him. Her muffled cries intensified as Lugio inserted his last penis into her pussy. Like several pistons, his cocks pounded away rhythmically, causing her body to move with the pattern.

The sexual energy built up inside her as she attempted to hold back her organism. She could see the hourglass slowly running down, and knew that she couldn't allow herself to cum until the after the hourglass ran down. She also needed to buy time until she could figure out want to do about this situation. It seemed hopeless, and she was finding it hard to concentrate with the demon fucking her. She wished that Erica were here to help her out

"I can feel you almost ready to cum, you slut," said Lugio. He watched the sands in the hourglass, and increased his speed and power as time nearly ran out. "You are remarkable strong when you need to be. That's is a fine quality for a sex slave."

Comet Girl moaned heavily as she struggle to hold back her climax. She had only a few grains of sand left to endure. She would be forced to climax hard afterwards, but it would be after she met Lugio's challenge. Both Eugene and her identity would be safe for a while. Hopefully long enough for her to figure out a plan. Only five grains left.

Sensing his near defeat, Lugio ripped off Comet Girl's mask. She was so shocked by the act, that she lost her concentration. Just before the last grain fell, she climaxed. The sudden surprise unmasking was too much for her to endure. She came hard and intense as her body shook all over. The bound heroine was powerless to stop several aftershocks plowing through her tortured body.

His ill gotten victory caused Lugio to cum inside Comet Girl triumphantly as he filled all her openings with his demon seed. Warm fluid oozed out of her mouth, ass, and pussy like an overturned glass of milk. It continued to flow even after he removed his cocks from her.

As he pulled out, Becky cried, "NO!!!" knowing what would happen next.

Lugio pushed Comet Girl to the side and walked toward the seemingly helpless Eugene. The demon turned the hourglass into a large sword and began to swing as Eugene pulled out a small gavel from his pocket...

(End of Chapter 9)


Coming up -- We step away from Becky's ordeal to see how Lady Liberty is doing at the hands of Violator.