The Adventures of Comet Girl


Disclaimer -- The following material is an original story by Zeta Clarke. Any similarities you may find to other stories are purely coincidental. It should not be duplicated without the permission of its author and its authorized users. Because of the adult nature of the material, this story is meant for mature audiences only.


Note from author -- I been on vacation the last few weeks, and I got some really good ideas coming soon from my trip cross country. Thank you for the support the you have given so far.

Oh, don't let the title of the next chapter mislead you. There is no actual "water sports" involved (sexually or athletically related).


Chapter 5 -- Water Sports

(The Adams College for Young Women, a private school in Metrocity)

"What's going on?" asked Becky as she stood in the middle of the dark vacant basketball court. She saw only shadowy figures in the bleachers around her. She felt a little uncomfortable wearing her skimpy white Comet Girl outfit with blue, knee high boots. Becky Jenson still found the whole idea of being a superhero discomforting. But she disliked even more the thought that everyone was only watching her because of her sexy body. Although her blue mask disguised her true identity from the audience, it did very little to hide her curvaceous chest. Her perfect breasts nearly burst out of her tiny top. The bright comet emblem, which matched the color of her golden blond hair, barely hid her perky nipples. And her red bracelets hardly distracted anyone's attention away from her perfectly sized 36Cs.

Comet Girl looked around intently, but struggled to see in the dimly lit gym. She wished she possessed the enhanced senses of her roommate Erica, who was better known as Lady Liberty. Right now, she and Lady Liberty were not getting along very well. Erica still blamed Becky, in part, for her father's strange transformation into a woman. Erica resented having to lie to everyone about her father's apparent absence, and the appearance of an aunt that she never mentioned before. Lying apparently was against her "superhero code". Erica also appeared jealous of the attention that her father now gave to this fledgling super heroine.

Several bright spotlights scanned the gym floor and the audience. Comet Girl failed to recognize anyone in the audience until the lights converged on one man standing in the front row bleachers. Everyone around him remained obscured by the unnatural darkness in the gym. Becky froze when she recognized who stood in front of her. It was her ex-boyfriend Brad. An anger quickly grew in Becky as she remembered how Brad raped her a few months ago near the river. That was the night she gained her superpowers. She had thought, and hoped, he died when a piece of a comet impacted near them. Although authorities never found a body, Becky could not imagine how could he have survived?

"Comet Girl, I have someone here to see you," said Brad with a sadistic smile. Comet Girl barely noticed the woman standing next him, until that woman flipped over the railing, and landed gracefully on the sunken gym floor below. The lights in the basketball court turned on, and in the lights, Becky recognized Lady Liberty standing in front of her. Her face was void of emotion as she stared at the wall behind Comet Girl. Her gaze was fixed upon the painted Amazon mascot on the stone wall just behind the team benches.

Becky noticed that Lady Liberty's outfit was very different also. Instead of her normal red, white, and blue costume, she wore an outfit made up of black silk and see through lace. Although Erica was a year younger than Comet Girl, she looked considerably more adult in her new outfit. Becky never imaged that Lady Liberty could look so sexy in a black mask and lingerie. She instinctively ran to her pseudo-partner in justice, and shook her gently. The brainwashed super heroine, however, continued to stare blankly past Comet Girl in a dreamlike state.

"What have you done to Lady Liberty?" Comet Girl asked.

"I had fun breaking that patriotic bitch, but I'm going to have even more fun with you...Becky." With that, Lady Liberty tore Comet Girl's mask away. Becky tried to hide her face from the crowd as they all gasped in a strange dreamlike unison.

"Oh no!!!" she cried. Although Becky had only been a super heroine for a few months, she understood the importance of maintaining a secret identity.

"You've been very bad girl, Becky. It's time for your spanking" Brad laughed evilly.

Lady Liberty grabbed Comet Girl by her soft golden hair, and wrestled her violently to the ground. But before the powerful Liberty could smack Becky's beautiful behind, Comet Girl threw the other heroine nearly twenty feet backwards, into the basket on the far court. The backboard on the basket shattered as pieces of Plexiglas and twisted metal crumbled to the ground. Lady Liberty took one of the large bent pieces of metal, and hurled the object at Comet Girl. But the metal bounced harmlessly off Comet Girl's invisible force field.

Becky looked desperately for her mask on the ground, but could not find it. Still covering her face with her arm, she fired several energy blasts at Lady Liberty, who was running down the court toward her. One of the green blasts knocked Liberty to the floor as parts of her outfit burned away revealing even more of her seductive body. Erica jumped to her feet quickly, and continued her full court press. Comet Girl knew that her lower powered blasts couldn't hurt Erica, but hoped it would slow her down long enough for Becky to form some kind of strategy.

Lady Liberty, however, executed a series of lightening fast flips as she dodged all of Comet Girl's further blasts. Becky could not keep ahead of the super fast heroine, who eventually grappled her. Both superwomen fell the ground as they desperately struggled with each other. Becky was severely handicapped in this battle though, because she still refused to reveal her face to the crowd. Comet Girl, who was virtually indestructible to all weapons, never thought her own mask could be used against in this way. Becky was forced to allow most of Erica's many hits to go unblocked, as she continued to hide her face from the curious crowd above. The super heroine erected several force fields to protect herself from Lady Liberty's mighty blows, but Erica persistently shattered each one. And although Lady Liberty was not a strong as Comet Girl, her numerous hits took their toll on the struggling heroine. Comet Girl managed to mount a small defense when some of her one-handed jabs connected, but she knew she would lose the battle at this rate. Becky took a chance, and grabbed Erica with both hands. Their hot bodies wrapped and pulled on each other in an insanely sexual game of Twister. Liberty eventually managed to place her long slender legs around Comet Girl's neck. The brain-washed heroine choked the defiant Becky till Comet Girl was unconscious from her weakened state.

Becky recovered quickly, however, but found herself in the center of the court with her arms and legs spread apart. Lady Liberty straddled the weakened Comet Girl, pinning Becky's shoulders to the hardwood floor with her strong powerful legs. She then grabbed the captive heroine's ankles, and spread them farther apart. This left Erica's pussy positioned perfectly above Becky's mouth. Comet Girl buried her face in Erica's sweet smelling sex to conceal her identity from the spectators overhead. Lady Liberty's in turn buried her own face dangerously in Comet Girl's crotch. The entire situation aroused Becky somewhat as her panties became soaked with her own juices and sweat.

Somehow Brad, who was still watching from the bleachers above, ordered the bright spotlights to focus on the two heroines on the basketball court. Without prompting, Erica lifted up Comet Girl's skirt so the audience could see her soaked panties underneath. Becky was too weak, and too ashamed, to stop her attacker from pulling them down almost past her knees. She saw countless flash bulbs going off, and heard humiliating laughter as her sex was displayed before the mysterious mob in the stands above her.

"You can't do this," cried Comet Girl. She imaged what the headlines tomorrow would read.

Like a programmed robot, Lady Liberty again placed her mouth over Becky's defenseless crotch, but this time, masterfully sucked the fledgling heroine's clit. Becky could not stop moaning as she tried to push her roommate off. In Comet Girl's weakened condition, she was powerless against Erica's sensual assault. Comet Girl allowed the teenaged attacker's tongue to tunnel its way into her quivering pussy. Becky's was subjected to endless stimulation as tiny bumps on Erica's tongue rubbed against the sensitive sides of her defenseless vagina. Liberty slowly moved her tongue in small circles, briefly pausing each time she moved deeper into the Becky's sweet tasting cunt. Comet Girl's body became more aroused by the anticipation of Erica's deeper penetration. She insanely wished for herself to cum, to relieve the sexual tension building within her. She was uncertain how much more she could endure this humiliating treatment.

"Somebody please help me!" she demanded.

A voice from the side of the court responded, "I'll help you."

The voice belonged to Dr. Sam Schneider, who was uncharacteristically wearing an attractive black dress with high heals. The doctor, who was recently transformed from a man to a woman after being exposed to radiation, was still adjusting to the change in wardrobe. As she approached, Lady Liberty lifted Becky to her knees, and turned her toward the doctor. Erica forced poor Comet Girl's arms behind her back, arching her like a bow. Becky still hoped that no one recognized her face, even though it was obvious that their attention was drawn to her jutting tits and her exposed pussy instead. She was trapped, and had no chance of winning this time. Unless of course the doctor, who was also Lady Liberty's father, had a plan. She carefully watched Dr. Schneider approach, hoping for some sign. When the doctor was only a few feet away, she stopped, and lifted up her low cut dress. Becky was horribly shocked to see five very large penis shaped tentacles coming out of the doctor's pelvis. They reached for her, and penetrated her mouth, pussy, and anus. She struggled with all her remaining super strength, but could not escape, because Erica still held her firmly. The vile tendrils raped the young blond heroine as she continued to fight. Becky closed her eyes, and cried.

"Nnnnooooo!!!!" Becky screamed as everyone in the gym laughed. She opened her eyes, and looked around.

Her basketball coach, who was now staring at Becky, said, "Day dreaming again Miss Jenson? Maybe a shower will wake you up. And don't think for a moment I'm going to give you special treatment, because you're rooming with our star player." Becky saw Erica on the court wearing a team jersey and holding a worn-out basketball. Erica give Becky a disapproving glare as she shook her head. Fortunately, no one noticed that she had also angrily crushed the basketball in her bare hands.

Becky yawned, and dragged herself lazily into the locker room. She tried to figure out which of Erica's superhero codes she violated this time. The last few months have been difficult for Becky, and she has had trouble sleeping. Her nightmares were always different. Sometimes they appeared real, and sometimes they were totally farfetched. It also didn't help that she was now required to follow Lady Liberty on nightly patrols, to learn the superhero trade. Between her nightmares, classes, extracurricular activities, and Erica's constant superhero lectures, it's a wonder Becky got any sleep at all. 

Becky removed her sweaty gym clothes, and folded them neatly. She placed the folded clothes in her tall metal locker, and grabbed a clean towel. She also grabbed a red gym bag with her shampoo, soap, and conditioner. As she closed the door on her locker, she realized she was still wearing her magic amulet. Becky knew she shouldn't be using it here, but she couldn't resist the coolness of the charm's effect. She looked around, and made sure no one was looking, especially Erica. She then grabbed the golden amulet, and recited the activation spell in her head. The amulet glowed, and then there was a blinding light that surrounded the locker room. Becky was now standing beside her locker, fully clothed in her Comet Girl outfit. She marveled at the simplicity of the magic charm and how valuable a gift it was. It was the same amulet that Erica and Michael used to hide their costumes. It was too bad it could only be used to switch between her super heroine costume and one regular outfit. Imagine the uses during Prom, she thought.

She recited the activation spell again, and there was another blinding light. Becky now stood naked in the locker room as she was before. She grabbed her towel again, and removed her magic amulet. She carefully placed the charm in her locker, and grabbed her red gym bag as she walked into the dimly lit showers.

The water was hot against her body as Becky let the water flow down her hair and over the rest of her wondrous form. She grabbed the shampoo, and began to lather up. She ran her hands slowly through her hair, and along her neck. Becky then massaged the back of her neck as she moved her head slowly from side to side. The water continued to cascade down her voluptuous body, over and around her most feminine features. She casually grabbed one of her shapely breasts, and her mind drifted away again. Before she realized what she was doing, Becky began fondling her breast, much in the same way as she did in front of the bikers a few months before. And with her other hand, she shampooed the neatly shaved hairs along her pussy.

 "Why is this happen to me?" she asked herself. "I don't want to be a superhero. I want a normal life, with a normal relationship."

She placed her head in her arm, and leaned into the wall in front of her. The steamy hot water ran down her back as she thought about Brad. There was a time where Brad was her world and her only future. He started out the perfect gentleman, but then he got involved with Internet Porn. His obsession took a worst turn when he developed a superhero fetish, no a fantasy rather. He was beyond a healthy interest in the topic. She tried not to imagine what he would have done now since she become a true super heroine.

The water suddenly turned icy cold, and she was quickly jarred back to reality. Becky tried adjusting the metal faucet, but only cold water came out of the nozzle overhead. Then there was a sharp sting on her backside as if someone smacked her tight behind. She turned around to see who it was, but there was no one in the showers but her.

"Ouch, damn it!" she screamed as hot water scolded her back. She adjusted the faucet yet again.

"What's the matter Comet Girl? Can't take the heat?" said a voice beside her.

Becky turned, but saw no one. There was only a mist coming from the hot shower head above.

"Did you miss me, Beck?" said the voice. It was Brad's voice. Was she dreaming again, she thought.

"Brad?" she asked.

"New and improved actually. Looks like we both now have superpowers, babe."

Becky felt someone touch her again. She quickly turned to grab the person, but there was nothing there. Then she was hoisted into the air, three feet from the ground. The naked Comet Girl felt many hands caressing her various erotic zones. She tried desperately to keep her composure even though it felt like a hundred men were fondling her body.

"Brad, don't do this. I'm warning you."

"Fuck you! I'm going to finish what I started a few months ago. It's taking me forever to learn how to use my powers. Hell, it took me almost a month just to learn how to take a form other than a puddle."

Comet Girl twirled around quickly like a figure skater leaping through the air. She felt the many wet hands that were holding her slip away. She remained in the air, however, hovering three feet from the tile floor below. The water in the shower was still running, but nothing was draining. There was a large puddle forming in the center of the showers. Becky was startled to see the puddle take the form of a Brad, only transparent. The form then turned into a mini tidal wave that threw her against the wall. The tile along the wall cracked as she was viciously plowed into it.

Becky stood up, and brushed the broken pieces of tile that stuck to her wet skin. Her hand began to glow green as she released a powerful blast at the watery creature in front of her. Instantly, the figure vanished. But then Becky was surrounded by a stinging mist as Brad picked Comet Girl up into the air again.

"Stupid bitch. You've met your match. Your blasts have no effect on me, because I am Hydro-boy, Master of Water."

"And corny monologues," sarcastically added the super heroine.

"Maybe you would like a demonstration of my power. You see as water, I can flow into even the tightest orifice." Becky felt Hydro-boy oozing himself into her pussy. She tried to tighten her muscles, but could not stop his intrusion. She then felt the walls of her vagina widen, and suddenly turn painfully cold.

"I can also turn myself into any shape and size of ice." Comet Girl felt the large ice shaft forming within her pussy. Hydro-boy began to painfully move the dildo back and forth as he increased its girth. The tormented Becky was sure that Brad's ice dick would split her into two as it continued to grow inside her. She became extremely scared when it pressed dangerously against her unbroken hymen. As she was about to scream for help, Hydro-boy formed an ice dildo the completely filled Comet Girl's beautiful mouth. She then felt another dildo form inside her ass as Brad trusted himself deeply into all three of Comet Girl's openings.

"NNMMHHH!!!" cried Comet Girl as the water villain pumped himself into the heroine. She felt an intense pain inside her pussy as Brad tore into her sex.

"Oops, I think I broke it," said the horrible super villain as blood flowed from Comet Girl's pussy. "I can't believe you were still saving yourself. It's fuck'n fitting though. I was the first to take your anal virginity, now I have taken it all."

"MMMMHHHHNNN!" cried Comet Girl through the shard of ice in her mouth. She prayed that this was only a dream, and that she would find herself asleep in the showers. But this was not a dream. This was very real, and Brad had really returned. And worst of all, he took the only thing Becky felt was normal about herself since becoming a superhero.

"Hold it right there," cried Lady Liberty as she walked into the showers. She paused briefly because she was somewhat torn between her duty to protect the innocent and her distaste for Becky. Part of her actually wanted Becky hurt by this villain, but then she remembered how her mother was raped and killed much in the same way. She couldn't let this happen, even to someone she despised.

"Two heroines for the price of one. This is my lucky day," announced Hydro-boy as her dropped Becky to the ground. He then dissolved, and flowed across the tiled shower floor toward Lady Liberty. The strange villain reformed into a large watery beast inches from Lady Liberty. Erica kicked the watery figure that formed in front of her, but her foot went harmlessly through Hydro-boy as he laughed. He then created a sheet of ice on the floor of the shower that caused the heroine to fall to the cold ground.

Hydro-boy quickly took advantage of Liberty's fall. He threw himself onto the heroine, and soaked into her costume. Liberty struggled, but Brad firmly pinned her to the ground somehow. She could feel the villain inside her tight costume as he moved around underneath the one-piece outfit. He oozed himself into her tight pussy, and formed two large ice dildos which pushed there way deep into Erica. The super heroine screamed in agony as the villain created wicked bumps and ridges along the icy shafts, and continued to penetrate the young hero. Hydro-boy then began to fuck poor Erica by pulling one dildo out as he pushed the other in.

"No Brad, stop this. You can have me. Just let Lady Liberty go," said the tortured Comet Girl. She knew that Lady Liberty would lose her powers temporary whenever she was sexually stimulated. If Brad continued to fuck her this way, he would surely kill her by accident.

 

"Run Becky. Goooohh!" cried Lady Liberty. Hydro-boy stepped up his attack as he added another dildo inside the screaming heroine. He also whipped ice tendrils across Erica chest, bruising her wondrous tits. Her costume was torn to sheds by the sharp ice barbs.

"Okay Brad. You wanted to be inside my so much. Here's your chance," said Comet Girl angrily. She took a deep breath, and slurped as much of Hydro-boy into her mouth as she could. The remaining pieces of the villain turned to puddles of water. He protested as she spit him out into a nearby toilet, and flushed him away, like the piece of shit he was.

Comet Girl then grabbed Lady Liberty, and took her into the locker room.

"Hey Erica, why do super heroines wear skimpy outfits?" Becky jokingly asked as she pointed out the many tears in Liberty's costume.

"Why?" Erica responded suspiciously.

"To cut down on the cost of repairs silly." The two heroines laughed.

She watched the door as Erica used her amulet to change into her jersey and short pants.

"But seriously, are you okay?" she asked Erica, who nodded.

"I still have to regain my strength though."

"Erica, thanks for saving me back there."

"Hey, WE saved each other...PARTNER." Erica said with a warm smile. She extended her hand to Becky. Becky returned a big smile, and hugged her roommate instead of taking her hand.

(End of Chapter 5)


Coming up -- Dr. Schneider gets more than she bargains for when she applies at Adams College. Lady Liberty takes Comet Girl to a comic book convention in Golem City, where she runs into the Milk Man, and old enemy of her mother. And, oh yeah, someone at the convention wants reimbursement from Comet Girl for using the name.