The Adventures of Comet Girl

Note from author -- I found out today from the members section of Superheroinecentral.com that there is already an established character called Comet Girl. I want everyone one to know that character this is not the same character as the one in this story.

Chapter 4 -- Comet Girl Cums to the Rescue

Dr. Sam Schneider steered the modified camper onto the dirt road. The large off-road tires spun in the loose dirt before gaining traction. The doctor was an attractive widower in his fifties. Although he focused on gaining his doctorates in Biology and Physics, he could have easily been a pro-athlete instead.

His teenage daughter Erica sat in the passenger seat beside him. She was beautiful, like her mother, the doctor thought. She had the same shoulder length black hair, well defined cheekbones, and fabulous smile. Erica will grow up to look just like Christine, he thought. If only her mother were alive to see Erica now. No one expected their little girl to inherit her mother's duties as a superhero so early. She was born with her mother's super powers, but didn't quite have the skills or the discipline needed to be a super heroine, especially in a city the size of Metrocity. But when her mother was brutally raped and killed a few years ago, Erica took on her mother's role. Her brother Michael then became Liberty Lad. And together, they defend Metrocity from villains such as The Skull, Brain Child, and Brute.

Sam occasionally glanced over at his daughter, who was staring out the window. Erica watched her brother playfully gliding through the air outside. He knew she hated the fact that her brother could fly, and she could not. Although she seemed to have all of Lady Liberty's powers, she could not manage to fly. Erica was convinced that she did not gain that ability. Dr. Schneider, on the other hand, insisted that her ability to fly needed to be awakened somehow.

Suddenly, there was a large explosion, and the ground shook. Michael flew over to the camper, and grabbed the top of it. He kept the camper steady as a ground tremor passed.

"Dad, we're too late," Erica told her father. She noticed another explosion to the west of them. The ground shook again. With her enhanced hearing, she noticed the cracking of concrete from the dam miles away. "I think the second impact damaged the dam."

"You better go with your brother to take care of it. I shouldn't have any problems retrieving Fragment One. Assuming it didn't disintegrate on impact."

"Let's hope The Skull doesn't get a piece of it."

"And I hope I can use it to cure Jacob this time."

"I doubt The Skull wants to be cured," Erica stated with very little emotion. She put on her red mask, and made sure the rest of her outfit was in place. Her costume was much like her mother's. Both proudly displayed America's colors, and both were very flattering to the female body. Erica's outfit was not as skimpy as her mother's though, to the dismay of the many of the male citizens of Metrocity. Erica's father made sure to tone down the new costume, especially after being forced to witness his wife's rape. He wanted to discourage anyone from thinking about doing the same to his young daughter.

His own choice of attire was a stark contrast to his daughter's colorful, well maintained costume. He wore an old T-shirt with faded blue jeans. The shirt was wrinkled, but clean. He also casually wore wire rimmed glasses that looped around his ears. His deceased wife Christine always loved the doctor's look. The only time the doctor didn't wear "regular clothes", was when he was giving a lecture or not wearing anything.

Lady Liberty jumped out of the moving vehicle, through a special hatch in the roof. She then leapt into the air as the hatch automatically closed. Her brother Michael grabbed her by the waist, and he flew both of them west, toward the dam. Erica hoped that they will get there in time.

After driving a few miles farther, Dr. Schneider stopped the vehicle, and walked into the back part of the camper. He grabbed several large metal containers marked with radiation symbols, and set each on the ground outside. He rubbed his hand through his stubble as he looked into the reflective cover of the container. Sam then went back into the vehicle, and put on a radiation suit. He tested the computer display built into the suit's visor before he stepped back outside. The doctor also examined the complicated sensor built into the palm of his suit.

Meanwhile, the unconscious Comet Girl lay on top of a glowing clump of metal at the bottom of a large crater. She still remained partially clothed from Brad's recent attack on her. The combination of the cold air, and the minute vibrations for the comet made her breasts perk up a bit. She was certainly a sight to see as her bare breasts moved up and down slowly with each deep breath she took.

There was glow from above as a strange clock face appeared in mid-air. The hands on the clock moved backwards as the air around entire time portal appeared to distort. From the clock face, a tall British looking man walked forward. He was wearing a nice three piece suit, and a funny shaped derby. He looked around, and then he looked at his pocket watch.

"Perfect timing," said the man as paused at the edge of the crater. He appeared to be making calculations in his head, before he jumped into it. At the precise moment, he tucked into a roll to prevent his legs from shattering. He then stood upright just as he was about the roll into Comet Girl.

He then pulled a glowing green dagger from his suit pocket, and was about to plunge the dagger into Becky's bare chest, when he just stopped. He leaned toward Comet Girl, took a deep breath, and admired the young woman's perfume. He hesitated briefly.

"I suppose we have just enough time for one more. For old time's sake," whispered the strange man into Comet Girl's ear. He placed the glowing dagger back into his pocket. He then ran his hand across Becky's face. He traced the outline of her lovely lips before plunging his index and middle fingers into her mouth. He moved his fingers back and forth in a mocking fashion. Although she remained unconscious, Becky's lips seem to suck on his fingers as he assaulted her.

The strange man in the derby then placed both his hands on either side of Becky's breasts, and squeezed them together. He moved them around in a circular pattern, giving each tit a deep thorough massage. Her breasts followed the man's every movement as he playfully molested them. He then twisted one of her nipples while he licked the other. He slowly and carefully moved his tongue along the very edge of her erect nipple. He then took the entire thing into his mouth, and began to suck on it. He continued to move his tongue around the nipple as he sucked.

Although he had planned every detail to the last second, he never imaged how vulnerable Comet Girl would be at this moment. This time, he didn't need to use restraints. And this time, he didn't even need to freeze time to take advantage of her. She was completely as his mercy now, and in real time. He wanted to make every minute count, because once he successful kills her, he will never have this chance again. It was almost enough for him to consider aborting the mission, and return to the future. But then again, that would be a complete waist of time.

Not too many people on Earth could claim to do what he was doing at this moment. Most of them would have mutated from the radiation in the crater, if not been killed.. The man did not worry though, because he had already been exposed to the radiation before. It no longer affected him like it would anyone else. After all, it was his initial exposure to the radiation which granted him mastery of time. And it was this mastery of time that gave him the ability to go back into the past to destroy Comet Girl before she became a hero.

Wasting no more time, he slowly parted Comet Girl's slender legs, exposing her pussy even more. He buried his face into her wondrous womanhood. His tongue explored her outside folds carefully and efficiently before diving into the deeper regions of her sex. As his tongue moved in and out of her, he unbuttoned his pants, freeing his erected penis. The man was pleased to see that the vulnerable Comet Girl was already reacting to his advances. Her muscles tensed, while her breasts became more erect. Her temperature rose also, and her body began to sweat. More importantly, her pussy was lubricating itself in anticipation of his cock. He recalled the hours he had spent torturing her future self as he attempted to learn the optimal frequency and patterns of thrusts to make Becky climax. The man prided himself in his ability to make Comet Girl climax in exactly 6.54 seconds. But now her first will be her last, he thought.

He was about to begin fucking Comet Girl, when he sensed a disruption in time. He looked up. But before he could react, someone grabbed him, and threw him out of the crater quickly. The man instantly reached for his pocket watch, but it was missing.

"Looking for this Time Keeper," said the beautiful woman in front of him. She was carrying his pocket watch. "I remember all the times you've used this to take advantage of Comet Girl and me. Looks like I get to use your Time Stop against you now."

"Lady Liberty? But how did you escape my men?" Time Keeper growled. He thought he had left her trapped in the future with Comet Girl, but then he saw the opened time portal behind her.

Lady Liberty pressed the button on top of the golden pocket watch. Time around her appeared slow down, and man in the suit was powerless to react. Lady Liberty quickly subdued the frozen villain, and threw him into the open time portal, knowing Becky's future self would be safely on the other side to take care of him. She then floated down to the bottom of the crater, and made sure to clothe Comet Girl before she returned home. She headed for the time portal when she stopped. She realized that this would her only chance to see her father again.

Following the strange readings displayed on his visor, Dr. Schneider soon found the fragment's impact zone. He couldn't explain the energy peaks he had followed, but it led him directly into a clearing made by Fragment One. When he arrived, he surveyed the area. The ground around the impact was devastated. Trees had been destroyed, and tons of dirt had been unearthed. To his surprise, Lady Liberty was standing in front of him smiling. But it wasn't his daughter, though. It looked more like his wife Christine.

"Chris?" asked Sam.

"Dad. It's me. I came from the future to help Comet Girl." She began to slowly glide toward her father, but then flew into his chest. She hugged him, and felt his stubble. She almost forgot how he looked.

"Erica, you're flying?"

"I know I shouldn't be here, but I had to tell you I turned out okay. And I want to tell you I'm sorry for the things I said. Well the things I'm going to say anyway. I love you Daddy. And...and...."

"And what?"

"...and...in the future, I couldn't help prevent your death. I sorry, Daddy." With that, Lady Liberty flew into the time portal, with tears in her eyes. The portal closed instantly behind her.

"Erica? Wait."

Dr. Schneider stood confused. He ran to the edge of the crater, and took several readings with his suit's built-in instruments. He also examined the area around the time portal, but found not evidence of it existence. He then adjusted his visor to magnify the image inside the crater. He was shocked to find someone down below. He magnified the image again, and saw the unconscious Becky. Could this be Comet Girl, he asked himself.

He ran back to get a rope from the camper. He tied it to a tree closest to the crater, and began to descend the side. He then realized that if Erica came to help Comet Girl, why didn't she get her out of the crater. When he was halfway down, he lost his footing, and fell on top of Becky. After regaining his footing, the doctor grabbed Becky, and lifted her over his right shoulder. A green glow completely surrounded both of them as he moved her toward the side of the crater. He then grabbed the rope, and began to slowly climb up the side of crater. Unfortunately, he stumbled on the loose earth again, and both he and Becky tumbled back down onto the comet fragment..

The doctor felt a sharp pain in his arm when his computer noted that his suit had been breached. He noticed that his right arm was now exposed, and bleeding. He felt Becky's smooth skin against his painfully sore forearm. The suit's radiation monitor also notified Sam that he was being exposed to large doses of radiation. Sam placed Becky on his shoulder again, and knew he would have to get up the side of the crater before he received any more radiation. He forced his way to the top, and quickly took Becky to his camper.

"Miss, are you okay?" asked Dr. Schneider. His voice was higher pitched than normal, almost feminine sounding. He took several readings, and was surprised to find that Becky did not emit any radiation, even after receiving such large doses. He then examined himself and realized his sensor must have been damaged somehow. His readings were identical to hers, including the bio-scan, which read things such as blood type, hormone levels, and internal organs. He grabbed several instruments and a hypo-spray from inside the camper, and brought them out. Sam monitored Becky with the new devices, and injected her with some chemicals. Confident about his safety, he then removed the helmet of his torn radiation suit.

After several minutes, Becky's eyes began to open. She was disoriented, and scared.

"Where am I?" she asked. Becky looked down, and quickly covered her skimpy outfit with her hands. "What's going on? Where's Brad?"

"I'm Dr. Schneider. I was retrieving fragments from an exploded comet, when I found you in one of the craters. Are you okay?"

"Yes, ma'am."

"Ma'am?" said Dr. Schneider. Becky looked puzzled. Sam turned, and looked at himself in one of the reflective metal containers that he had set out before. He was shocked to see a woman staring back at him. "My God. The radiation must of ..."

Sam took off his gloves, and slowly ran his hands through his long hair. He then patted himself down, and stopped when he reached his chest. There was no mistaken what he felt through his suit. He quickly ripped off the suit, to reveal a his pair of loose fitting blue jeans and a baggy T-shirt. The doctor lifted his T-shirt from his chest a little, and slumped to the ground. Erica and Michael are not going to believe this.

"Ma'am, are you okay?" asked Becky. She then heard the rumble of motorcycles approaching. She saw several large bikers get off their cycles, and walk toward them. Becky paused a moment, and then recognized the approaching men. They were wanted for robbing the First Bank of Metrocity a few days ago. Everyone called them "The Jack-o-Lanterns", because they wore Halloween makeup, and dressed up like monsters on motorbikes.

"Look at what we have here boys. Seems like we have ourselves some damsels in need of assistance," said their leader. He glanced at Comet Girl and her costume.

Dr. Schneider stood up, adjusted HER glasses, and said, "No need. We have everything under control."

"You don't understand. We here to offer you SPECIAL assistance." The leader walked over to Sam, and slapped her behind.

Sam clinched her teeth in anger, and leapt at lead biker. The doctor's new body was less muscular than before, but much better toned. She managed to get a few hits in before two of the leader's cronies jumped on her, and they wrestled her to the ground. One of the bikers pulled off her shirt. She struggled with them, but was easily overpowered by the stronger bikers.

Becky watched as the bikers stripped the struggling doctor of her jeans. The doctor insisted that Becky run away, but she knew they intended to rape the woman. She knew that they would eventually catch her on their motorcycles, and rape her too. An anger slowly developed within Comet Girl. Becky's recollection of her recent experiences with Brad only fed this anger. She could no longer hold herself back.

"Let go of her!" demanded Becky.

"So the slut thinks she's a really superhero, huh?"

Comet Girl charged at the group of bikers. She hit a vampire looking biker, and threw him back at least ten yards. Another biker, dressed like a zombie, grabbed her wrist, but she tossed him into a tree one hundred feet away. Becky then felt something hit her back. She turned, and saw a young teen holding the end of a broken bat. He looked at her in terror as he stumbled backwards, trying to get away. His makeup was smearing from the nervous sweat pouring down his forehead. The boy looked a little like Brad, she thought. Becky clinched her fist as a ball of green energy formed in her hand. She angrily threw the energy ball at the teenager. It struck the biker in the chest, and he twitched violently before collapsing. Comet Girl then turned to the leader. She was filled with rage.

"So you really are a super heroine. No bother, costume antics are my specialty," he stated. He held a knife to Sam's throat.

"Let go of her!"

"Go fuck yourself."

"What?" asked Comet Girl.

"You heard me, bitch. If you want this whore to live, go play with yourself." The leader slowly moved the knife. A small wound formed as blood appeared on the doctor's neck.

"No wait. I'll do it, but you have to promise to let her go." Becky could not believe what she was saying. She didn't even know the woman, but she had an urge to help her.

Becky closed her eyes, and slowly moved her hands from her hips to her waist. She placed them next to her breasts, and then cupped each one. She moaned softly as she rubbed her palms over her nipples. She grabbed her top, and pulled the top down, revealing her perky nipples. She ignored the calls and whistling of the men around her. Comet Girl then arched her back as her continued to massage her tits with her hands. She took one hand, and rubbed her belly button as she gave a small whimper.

Comet Girl took that hand, and placed it to her lips. She kissed her fingers, and slowly licked them. With her saliva coated fingers, she rubbed her clit. She sent a wave of erotic pleasure through her entire body. She couldn't hold back her moans, as the men watched with their jaws dropped. She fell to her knees, and began to move her middle finger through the blond hair of her pussy while she continued to fondle her breasts with her other hand.

"Lift up your skirt, so I can see you," said the leader of the Jack-o-lanterns.

She obeyed. By now, she was already fucking herself with her fingers. She could feel herself getting more aroused as she played with herself in front of the group of strangers. She was moaning heavily as she built herself to a climax. She couldn't hold herself back. She never forced herself to go this far before. Then without warning, cum poured out of her.

She moaned, "Now let...her...go."

"You know? You looked like you're actually enjoying that," said the lead biker. "In fact, I think you want to fuck all of us too."

"No, never!" exclaimed Comet Girl as a ball of energy formed in her hand. She was ready to throw it, when the leader threatened to cut the doctor's throat again.

"ah, ah, ah," said the biker. "As I was saying."

Several of the men approached Becky as she spread herself out on the ground. Comet Girl allowed the men to strip her entirely naked, and grope her. Some of the men dove between her legs licked the fresh cum from her pussy. Other's fondled her smooth tits until they became sore and red. But no one could decide on who would actually start "pork'n her cat". Sam watched in shock as she was forced to relive her murdered wife's rape. None of the rapists then knew that they temporarily robbed her of all her wondrous powers, when she came. The current Lady Liberty suffered this also, but Comet Girl did not appear to have that weakness biker The doctor knew she wouldn't be able to stop them all by herself. But with Comet Girl's help.

"Comet Girl, now!" said Dr. Schneider as she hit the leader with her elbow. He doubled over in pain. She turned around, and grabbed him by his nuts, and squeezed.

"Believe me, I KNOW how much this hurts," she said to the injured leader.

 One of the other bikers grabbed Sam, as she feared. But Comet Girl quickly took care of him, and the others.

 (End of Chapter 4)

Next time -- Our young heroine experiences college life in a big city. How will she adjust to this new life, and to her new powers? We also find out if Comet Girl is more powerful than Lady Liberty. But to make matters worse, Brad returns as HydroBoy?